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06-03-2005, 11:47 PM
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| |  The lyrics thread
Post your lyrics here, kind of like the poem thread, but for lyrics. Offer praise and criticism.
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06-03-2005, 11:51 PM
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Longing
Entwined inside emotion
Void of introspection
A young child, upon a pedistol of the unknown
I play with her heartstrings..
Sorrowful rebuttle
To endless bouts of heartbreak
Retribution of emotions
You will get your comeuppance
Worthless waste of flesh[/i]
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06-08-2005, 08:48 PM
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@Mourn - That was good. For some reason, the combination of Gore and sophisticated words always make something sound good =]
Here's one of mine. Inspired from Sonata Arctica - Shamandalie
Depths of Emotion _ My Sea
In winter nights
I’d walk the streets
Just to remember your face
And as days would come
I’d sing a song
That takes me to that heavenly place
When I dream of you
I come to think
Maybe you were too good to be bad
I lay here alone
The most loveless of lives
In a world that was meant to be sad
Come autumn, come rain
Come winter, come pain
It’s always the same to me
Cause without you I’m blind
Cruel and unkind
I wish to reflect the depths… Of my sea
No matter how much I seem to regret
The actions I knew I would take
As I looked to your pictures, you looked to my face
I would give it all back
To have you near me now
As nights would come
I’d look to the stars
Hoping to catch you by chance
I can feel your presence
Guiding me forth
Showing me visions of a failing romance
I’ve thought hard of my life
Understanding my faults
But I can’t fix my mistakes
I’d beg and I’d run
For summer to come
Asking my dreams to awake
No matter how much I seem to regret
The actions I knew I would take
As I looked to your pictures, you looked to my face
I would give it all back
To have you near me now
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Come Autumn, come rain
Come Winter, come pain
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06-09-2005, 01:49 PM
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@Frostling: great, as always. you know how to play with words! *thumbup*
so.. fresh one, made today. Don't mind the depressing point and bad words. my "flair of poetry" is on summer vacation. 
Bleeding Stars
Blood is everywhere.
Just look closly.
And look well.
Definy thw rord "blood"
and you'll see
it's everywhere!
Stars are bleeding,
Bleeding to death
waiting for Rebirth.
Bleeding Stars
on my way to Hell.
six hundred sixty six
stars on my way.
Bleeding to death,
waiting for rebirth.
The stars are sould,
sould of the captured ones.
Mine will be one of them.
I don't want my soul.
i don't want rebirth.
i Want Hell on Earth.
Stars are bleeding,
Bleeding to death
waiting for Rebirth.
Bleeding Stars
on my way to Hell.
six hundred sixty six
stars on my way.
Bleeding to death,
waiting for rebirth.
One Star is bleeding,
Bleeding to death
waiting for Rebirth.
looking for salvation,
door to escape,
to stop bleeding.
Stars are bleeding,
Bleeding to death
waiting for Rebirth.
Bleeding Stars
on my way to Hell.
six hundred sixty six
stars on my way.
Bleeding to death,
waiting for rebirth.
The dead ones walk.
Walk on Bleeding Earth.
Earth itself is a Star now.
Earth is the Bleeding Star.
The biggest one.
Hell is on Earth.
And it's beelding!
Little Stars are bleeding,
Bleeding on Earth.
Bleeding to death
waiting for Rebirth.
Bleeding One Star
Bleeding to death...
To Death..
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06-09-2005, 02:49 PM
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@Dru -  Bloooood everywheeeere!
Except for having that stanza with the star a bit repetetive, it was all very good! Imaging bleeding stars is cool.
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Come Winter, come pain
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06-11-2005, 01:04 PM
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I don't think it's very good, but it's a try...
In deep abyss lies a soul,
tortured, suffered, |--------------------------------> Hell
but not alone...
Another soul
is elsewhere to be,|--------------------------------> Purgatory
millions of years she won't get free.
There in grass lies a third soul,
near to god|----------------------------------------> Heaven
but on her own.
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06-11-2005, 11:13 PM
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that actualy had a nice strong ending Punisher. Good job =]
Even in the most beautiful of places, being alone is a type of Hell of its own. Nice.
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Come Winter, come pain
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06-13-2005, 10:21 PM
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Originally Posted by Frostling @Dru - Bloooood everywheeeere!
Except for having that stanza with the star a bit repetetive, it was all very good! Imaging bleeding stars is cool. | It is very repetitive but good nonetheless |
06-14-2005, 05:33 AM
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This is my anti-religious opus!
Dismember the cross
Standing on the precipice of Despair
Contemplating what life is worth
What meaning does it hold they ask?
Religion gives them their re-birth.
An answer from the sullen skies
Baptized in pure lies
Everythings a sin
Dismember all the crosses
Let the skeptic masses rise
And scream into the skies
it's time this figment dies
We must be free of this infection
Set apart from their redemption
Nothing but a worldwide disease
Emotion is a sin.
Hatred our release
Relinqush your control
You'll decide your own defeat
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06-14-2005, 10:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Frostling that actualy had a nice strong ending Punisher. Good job =]
Even in the most beautiful of places, being alone is a type of Hell of its own. Nice. | tnx 
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